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Unsureness molds to subtlety
And subtlety to piety
In mourning of calamity
And trials of the sanity
The rule is obtuse brevity
No self-denying levity
For levity is tearing
And lack of it uncaring
A moment, breathless, riveting
A thousand "What ifs"
Pivoting
On one
climac
tic




hesitance


And everybody's leaving
And then returns the breathing
And cardiac tom-beating
Eventful, and yet fleeting
©2005-2009 ~DelphinusW
:icondelphinusw:

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I'm no poet, just wrote this on a lark... Needed to vent a bit of frustration.

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:iconshadowed-persona:
Good stuff there buddy, I like it a whole lot
:iconwitchlady:
thats really good.. nice to see you branching out. I like the way you pause as you read it.. you guide the reading well

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Just beyond the last horizen, I shall settle down
:iconkarianawinterwind:
You know I love it. It's just intelligent and it flows awesomely. I always want to read it out loud when I see it. Very good work. :clap:
:icondustbunnysoup:
I really like that. It sounds familiar for some reason.. I'm not sure.

I love the rhythm, though.

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Will you still respect me in the morning?
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It's all about beat; Snap your fingers.
:iconhisakaiya:
Oo, I love this, Delphinus

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